Feature · Stage 2, Map the book

How many people does your first chapter ask a reader to remember?

It is the commonest note a first chapter gets and the hardest thing to judge from inside your own book, because you already know who everybody is. This counts them, chapter by chapter, and tells you where that number sits against the novels on your shelf.

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How it works

Counted the same way the benchmark was.

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A named character, defined and then kept to

A term the classifier reads as a person, that is also a proper name rather than an ordinary word or a bare honorific. Elizabeth counts; Mrs, Colonel and Woman do not, even in a book that addresses and possesses them exactly as names. That distinction is the difference between a cast of thirty and a cast of ninety.

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Grouped by the chapter they first appear in

Every name at the point the reader meets it, in reading order, so a chapter carrying eleven introductions is visible as one line rather than as a feeling. Where the chapters could not be identified confidently the same groups are reported by tenths of the book instead, because a chapter number that might be wrong is worse than none.

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Split by how much of the book each one carries

Twenty mentions or more, five to nineteen, and fewer than five. The last group is the walk-on cast, and a long one is perfectly normal in a published novel - it is worth reading for the names you meant to do more with.

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Placed against published novels

Your cast size, your cast per ten thousand words, your principals and how many arrive in the first tenth, each given as a percentile against the novels in the benchmark. Every one of them was measured with the definition above, so the comparison is between two of the same thing.

Use cases

Where a cast list helps.

Opening chapters

Checking whether chapter one really does introduce nineteen people before anyone has spoken twice.

Structural edits

Finding the character who arrives in chapter four and is never mentioned again.

Series planning

Seeing which names carried book one before deciding who carries book two.

Submission

Answering the agent's note about too many characters with a figure rather than an argument.

FAQ

Questions about the cast report.

Why is my cast smaller here than in the character directory?

The directory lists every term that behaves like a person, which in some novels includes Miss, Lady and Brother, because they are addressed and possessed just as names are. That is right for a directory and wrong for a count, so this report narrows to proper names and says so.

Is a big cast a problem?

No, and the report never says it is. Published novels run from a handful of names to several hundred and both are finished books. The percentile tells you where you sit; what to do about it is a judgement about your story.

What if my chapters were not detected?

The arrivals are reported by tenths of the manuscript instead. Nothing on this screen prints a chapter number unless the scan is confident about where the chapters are.

Does an AI decide who is a character?

No. The classifier is rule-based, reading how a term behaves in your prose - what speaks, what takes a possessive, what an honorific sits in front of. Inference is inference, so the screen says so and each term reports its own confidence.

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